Jacob Johnson
Dr. Tinberg
ENG 101-A07
12/06/10
“Texting Our Lives Away”
Fifteen minutes before class starts, and a dozen students sit in wake of the
oncoming academia. All are deeply engaged in conversation, yet no word is spoken.
Trapped in silence—eyes glazed-over—fingers pounding relentlessly—all, oblivious to
the people around them. These students are merely a fraction of greater phenomenon.
We see it. We recognize it. However, we rarely look at the consequences.
Texting has become one of the most popular forms of modern communication,
without doubt. Whether it be in the classroom, at restaurants or even on the road, this
phenomenon simply cannot be avoided. While it is easy to recognizing the role that
texting plays in our advancing world, the need to look more critically at this practice is
becoming very apparent. Although the idea of texting may have been completely foreign
a few decades ago, it is now an undeniable growing aspect of our culture. As we take a
closer look at texting, we will see how simply it has become popular and how dire its
effects can be.
The first notable cause in the increase of texting would simply be in the available
of cell phones. While mobile devices are now common place, it is important to recognize
the fact that this is still fairly recent. Back in 2001, we saw reports of cell phone usage
accelerating as phones became more available and affordable(Sbranti). For text
messaging to truly take off, there needs to not only be a large audience of phone owners,
but also a sufficient period of time, over which users could become comfortable using a
phone for more than the traditional conversation. Naturally, as phone became more
popular and technology advanced, the accessibility of texting increase significantly. Once
the availability was in place, all that would be need would be a catalyst to make texting
go viral.
A second reason why texting has become so popular, is simply its convenience.
The fact is that teens—some of the most frequent texters—are now using texting to
replace phone conversations. (Bucciarelli) Texting allows for conversations to take place
in areas that would loud for phone conversations—on the flipside, it also allows for
conversations in intentionally quite place, such as classrooms. By making communication
so simple, it is easy to always spend a few more seconds to send yet another message.
Although texting is most popular among teens, adults are by no means immune to this
phenomenon. For many, texting has become to new way to send reminders or ask a quick
question. People love to talk. Any device which offers quick, easy communication is very
likely to catch on.
While texting has offered many advantages when it comes to staying it touch,
there certainly are draw backs which need to be mentioned. Perhaps the most notable
negative of effect of text messaging, is the distraction it creates while driving. It has been
reported that “Research has actually shown that texting while driving can make you 20
times more likely to get into a car accident”(Don’t text). While it is perfectly
possible to simply abstain from texting while driving—as many do—a significant amount
of texters do not use such caution. Although certain measures have been taken to prevent
texting while driving—such as petitions and ever laws—there remain concerns about how
many of these dangerous drivers will remain on the road.
Although texting while driving posing is a very immediate consequence of
texting, are also some long term concerns. One major concern which has been raised, is
the toil that text messaging has been taking on students’ writing skills(Texting,
Microblogging and overuse). Texting focuses on communication information as quickly
as simply as possible, thus abbreviations, informal acronyms and poor grammar become
common. As it becomes more and more a part of a students daily routine, many fear that
texting will soon become taxing on a student academic progress. There does not appear to
be any answer to this concern yet.
There is also see a more unique concern which is perhaps the most apparent. We
have just seen a concerning threat that texting may pose, but lets draw our attention to a
more immediate effect of this increasing trend. While text messaging may provide quick
and efficient communication, there are uncertainties about the social and psychological
effect it may be having on texters. It was reported by the New York Times in May of
2009 that texting is causing teenagers to have a sense of obligation to constantly be in
contact with friends. This hyper-connectivity could likely result in an unhealthy
dependence on constant, immediate communication(Hafner). Like any form of unnatural
dependence, there are certainly concerns that this progression of texting can have sever
social effects in the future. Studies have also shown, that many teens admit that their
social life would be hindered, if not cease altogether if they were to give up
texting(Teens).It is unclear what type of effects may be caused in the future, but by
simply looking at the world around us, it is clear that texting is certainly doing something.
All being said, texting has been becoming a large part of our modern culture, and
may very well continue in this process. There certainly are many benefits and
conveniences to this trend, but we cannot ignore the effects of it. The short-term
consequences of texting while driving cannot be ignored. This issue certainly has been
addressed to an extent, but it is unlikely it will be resolved easily. Also, the long-term
consequences, although not immediately apparent, may have drastic effects for future
generations. It is not entirely clear how we should proceed in regards to this trend, but the
one thing which is clear, is that we must be aware the effects it has had, and may have in
the future.
Bibliography:
Bucciarelli, Suzzane. "Teens are the Textiest People." Geeks Planet 11 Nov 2010: n. pag. Web. 27 Nov 2010.
“Don't text, or drink, behind the wheel." Industrial Engineer 42.5 (2010): 14. Academic OneFile. Web. 27 Nov. 2010.
Hafner, Katie. "Texting May Be Taking a Toll." New York Times. 26 May 2009: Web. 4 Dec 2010
Sbranti, J.N. "HTML Full TextCompetition for Cell Phones Is Fierce, Options Endless, Expansion Nonstop ." Newspaper Source. 7 Jul. 2001, web. Nov. 2010
"Teens Who Text." Communications of the ACM 51.11 (2008): 19. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. Web. 3 Dec. 2010.
"Texting, microblogging, and overuse of online tools will have a negative effect on student writing and academic performance." The Futurist Nov.-Dec. 2010: S3. Expanded Academic ASAP. Web. 27 Nov. 2010.
I am fairly happy with this piece so far. It certainly could use some improvements, but I just can't quite put my finger on what they are.
ReplyDeleteOverall, I think the trend is current, which adds a good degree of interest to it. Also, I am pleased with the sources I found for it. I would really love some feedback on what's "missing" at this point.
Hi Jacob:
ReplyDeleteYou do a fine job here. You've laid out a clear and timely thesis/trend.
Your analysis of both causes and effects is thoughtfully done. I was especially interested in the discussion about the impact on writing and on dependency. That last subject might merit a bit more discussion--it's complex and fascinating.
One additional suggestion: can you nail down whether a specific user is more likely than another? Do you have any demographic information to share on the trend itself?
Good work.
Works Cited? Bibliography:
Hi Jacob:
ReplyDeleteIn taking another look at your paper, I wondered whether you could be more explicit in the statement of the trend and might back up that trend with evidence.
What do you think?
You second comment is 100% spot on. I was actually surprised that you overlooked that in your intial feedback. Although the causes and effects are analyzed quite a bit, the trend itself need more clarification.
ReplyDeleteI didn't get a chance to provide any information as to the time frame or rate of increase of the trend. In my mind, that is a major detail to be left out.
For the final version, I will try to have that amended.